my first new addd:)

In these add it took me a while to do it almost 3 days. In the add you can see how iam using the most bright colors so i can get people attracted i also trying to make it simple but at the same what i wrote people would know what is it about.. The think i would change though is the typing i think that i should right less but with the same result show people what is the add about.. hope u like it>>